[Lunar-commits] <lunar> man page updates

[Stefan Wold]

commit 382cb480b4da7b7f49e12beeb35af787cb2da5d8
Author: Stefan Wold <ratler at lunar-linux.org>
Date: Sun, 12 Oct 2014 10:48:27 +0200
URL: https://github.com/lunar-linux/lunar/commit/382cb480b4da7b7f49e12beeb35af787cb2da5d8

man page updates
---
  man/lcrash.8     | +26/-11   
  man/lfirsttime.8 | +8/-7     
  man/lin.8        | +0/-3     
  3 files changed, 34 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

--- a/man/lcrash.8
+++ b/man/lcrash.8
@@ -1,31 +1,43 @@
-.TH "lcrash" "8" "Release $Revision$" "Terry Chan" "Lunar Crash Recovery"
+.TH "lcrash" "8" "October 2014" "Lunar Linux" "Lunar Crash Recovery"
 .SH "NAME"
 .LP 
 \fBlcrash\fR \- Lunar Crash Recovery manual
 .SH "OVERVIEW"
 .LP 
-This manual page was written to give some pointers on how to recover from a "lunar update" crash, or an otherwise broken set of lunar tools.
+This manual page was written to give some pointers on how to recover
+from a "lunar update" crash, or an otherwise broken set of lunar
+tools.
 .SH "DO NOT PANIC"
 .LP 
-These are the suggested steps after your system has been able to successfully boot back into a \fBLunar Linux\fR bash command prompt but you are not able to do a "lunar update" because of a crash/abort/power failure/whatever occuring in the middle of a "lunar update" and it did not finish installing the lunar commands and Moonbase.  All of these instructions should be run as "root".
+These are the suggested steps after your system has been able to
+successfully boot back into a \fBLunar Linux\fR bash command prompt
+but you are not able to do a "lunar update" because of a
+crash/abort/power failure/whatever occuring in the middle of a "lunar
+update" and it did not finish installing the lunar commands and
+Moonbase.  All of these instructions should be run as "root".
 
-\fB1. Update Your Lunar or Theedge: \fRUsing a web browser or wget, download a copy of http://www.lunar-linux.com/lunar/lunar.tar.bz2 or http://www.lunar-linux.com/lunar/theedge.tar.bz2.  If you use wget please do these steps: 
+\fB1. Update lunar coretools: \fRUsing a web browser or wget, download
+a copy of http://www.lunar-linux.org/lunar/lunar/lunar-XX.tar.bz2
+where XX is the latest version. If you use wget please do these steps:
 .IP
 cd /var/spool/lunar
 .IP
-wget http://www.lunar-linux.com/lunar/lunar.tar.bz2
+wget http://www.lunar-linux.org/lunar/lunar/lunar-XX.tar.bz2
 .LP
-If you use a web browser then go to the location mentioned above and download lunar.tar.bz2 and save it to the /var/spool/lunar directory. 
+If you use a web browser then go to the location mentioned above and
+download lunar.tar.bz2 and save it to the /var/spool/lunar directory.
 .LP 
 \fB2. Manually unpack Lunar: \fRNow unpack the tar.bz2 file with these commands:
 .IP
 cd /
 .IP
-bzcat /var/spool/lunar/lunar.tar.bz2 | tar xv
+tar xf /var/spool/lunar/lunar-XX.tar.bz2
 .IP
-cd lunar ; ./install
+cd lunar-XX ; make install
 .LP 
-Now your system should be able to run a \fBlunar update\fR.  This process will update the base scripts and the package collection (Moonbase). 
+Now your system should be able to run a \fBlunar update\fR.  This
+process will update the base scripts and the package collection
+(Moonbase).
 .LP 
 
 .SH "LIFESAVERS"
@@ -36,7 +48,7 @@ Below are some useful addresses
 \fBWebsite: \fRhttp://www.lunar\-linux.org/
 .P 
 
-\fBMaillist: \fRhttp://www.lunar\-linux.org/mailman/listinfo/lunar
+\fBMaillist: \fRhttp://lists.lunar\-linux.org/mailman/listinfo/lunar
 .P 
 
 \fBIRC: \fRirc.freenode.net #lunar
@@ -55,7 +67,10 @@ document was accurate when written. If you find inaccuracies, please send me
 clarifications.
 .SH "COPYRIGHT"
 .LP 
-This document is Copyrighted Terry Chan 2002-2003. It may be reproduced and distributed in whole or in part, in any medium physical or electronic, as long as this copyright notice is retained on all copies.
+This document is Copyrighted Terry Chan 2002-2003. It may be
+reproduced and distributed in whole or in part, in any medium physical
+or electronic, as long as this copyright notice is retained on all
+copies.
 .SH "AUTHOR"
 .LP 
 Terry Chan <tchan at lunar-linux.org>
--- a/man/lfirsttime.8
+++ b/man/lfirsttime.8
@@ -27,11 +27,9 @@ or
 .LP
 at your console.
 .LP
-.B Please remember that the Lunar Install/Rescue ISO is not a full featured system.
-.LP 
 A list of things to do:
 .TP 
-\fBNetwork settings\fP
+.B Network settings
 This step is crucial to your future success with 
 .B Lunar Linux.
 If you haven't configured your network yet try it with 
@@ -54,7 +52,7 @@ if you are not familiar with the content of this file.
 .TP
 .B Check the network device
 If pinging the IP address fails, check if your network interface is up
-and running. You may use the command \fBip\fP to view the interface's
+and running. You may use the command \fBip addr list\fP to view the interface's
 status.
 .IP
 If you cannot, then check if your \fBNIC (network interface card)\fP
@@ -78,7 +76,7 @@ found in \fI/etc/config.d/network/'interface'\fP (i.e. 'eth0' \->
 configuration manually it is required to restart the interface using
 \fBsystemctl\fP.
 .IP
-Example eth0 using DHCP: \fBsystemcl restart lnet-dhpcd at eth0\fP
+Example eth0 using DHCP: \fBsystemctl restart lnet-dhpcd at eth0\fP
 .IP
 Example eth0 using static ip: \fBsystemctl restart lnet-static at eth0\fP
 .TP
@@ -221,9 +219,12 @@ Lunar website for more information.
 .SH SEE ALSO
 Documentation at the Lunar Linux website at http://lunar\-linux.org
 .PP
-\fIlunar\fR\|(8), \fImoonbase\fR\|(1), \fIlin\fR\|(8), \fIlvu\fR\|(1), \fIlget\fR\|(8), \fIlrm\fR\|(8), \fIlnet\fR\|(8)
+\fIlunar\fR\|(8), \fImoonbase\fR\|(1), \fIlin\fR\|(8), \fIlvu\fR\|(1),
+\fIlget\fR\|(8), \fIlrm\fR\|(8), \fIlnet\fR\|(8)
 .SH DISCLAIMER
-The information and examples given here are for illustrative purposes. If you encounter any inaccuracies please send an email to the authors.
+The information and examples given here are for illustrative
+purposes. If you encounter any inaccuracies please send an email to
+the authors.
 .SH COPYRIGHT
 This document is originally Copyrighted Kagan Kongar 2002.
 .PP
--- a/man/lin.8
+++ b/man/lin.8
@@ -60,9 +60,6 @@ Decreases the level of message output.
 .B "\-v, \-\-verbose"
 Increases the level of message output.
 .TP
-.B \-w, \-\-want
-Try to install a different version that is not in moonbase.
-.TP
 .B \-4, \-\-ipv4
 Download sources using ipv4.
 .TP